Overall it's a great start but MCs emotional development is not upto the standard. I hope this story has harem content. Try not to drop the story,because it has a nice plot.
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ถูกใจIf you want harem in a novel that doesn't need it you are failing as a reader. There are plenty of good harem novels out there.
Dieznuts69420:harems sucks end of discussion.
Marco_Zilvetti:If you want harem in a novel that doesn't need it you are failing as a reader. There are plenty of good harem novels out there.
Oops, my last response wasn't for you, it was for the person above you, sorry about that, I missclick the reply button.
Dieznuts69420:harems sucks end of discussion.