Review Detail of Fallen_Heaven in Multiverse: Start from demon slayer.
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I like it. But you are making it a little bit boring make the chapters longer and also add some action .I will also wait for Harem ! . O and it is going to be about Multiverse ye ? SO question how is going Mc to travel through Multiverse ? How he is going to take the people he loves with him ? (Sorry for bad english not first language) ?
Multiverse: Start from demon slayer.
Rimuru_Tempest_9546
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well, its not a devil fruit. But yeah, I will surely write a backstory about the sword and the fruit.
Fallen_Heaven:The Fan-Fic have good potential so don't drop it. Waiting for a new chapters :). Also maybe you want to write some backstory about the sword. Because it is to mysterious it need good backstory in future and the fruit also need some kind of explanation because how a Devil fruit can be in Demon Slayer world :).
The Fan-Fic have good potential so don't drop it. Waiting for a new chapters :). Also maybe you want to write some backstory about the sword. Because it is to mysterious it need good backstory in future and the fruit also need some kind of explanation because how a Devil fruit can be in Demon Slayer world :).
Rimuru_Tempest_9546:Hmmm~it's just a slow pace, as I wasn't planning on adding multiverse because I am bored. Let's see in the future if I change my mind. Thanks for the review, and action will be a little later as he was in his training arc.
Rimuru_Tempest_9546:well, its not a devil fruit. But yeah, I will surely write a backstory about the sword and the fruit.