Review Detail of Poseidon_1_ in The Avatar in MHA

Very good start, for a non native English speaker, their language is pretty good with some spelling mistakes and wrong use of words but don’t overall effect it too much. MC’s powers are a good choice with a lot of room to expand. Author has clearly thought the fanfic through and is doing a good job! Advice, split up some of the paragraphs as they could be described as ‘monster’ paragraphs with how long they are. Additionally, you’ll learn with time, but the wrong use of words. Eg: Using loss instead of lose. Apart for the grammatical error it’s very good.