Review Detail of Renegade_Lemur in THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

This is one of the worst stories I've ever read, It starts out interesting, but the character mostly gets lost along the way and becomes simply idiotic, stupid and doesn't match his initial personality, MC studied more than 5/6 years of his life in a military camp, but he has no discipline at all and is just a stupid person. He himself said that he only lost the military games 3 times and it was only when all the students at the military camp got together against him, but he was beaten by a simple Bully from a normal school. I tried a lot to read this story as the idea is very good, but it doesn't work, I dropped it