Review Detail of _Himari_Nora_ in The Blackened Mc In Fantasy World

I like the story itself, and the characters too. It's easy to read without paying attention to the time going by, but. There are mistakes and you know it. Those mistakes distract, keep you turning back to read again and understand. I highly recommend you to use any app that can correct your mistakes, I use "Grammarly" and was never disappointed by using it. Also, personal advice, try to separate dialogue and description. It will ease reading and helps to better understand the things going on. Good luck!