Interesting story and has some great ideas! The biggest thing is the writing quality is not fantastic. If the author downloads grammarly or something and fixes all of the grammar then I will change my review. Also they need to separate the text lines when characters speak because you can't tel whether someone is speaking or if you're reading the plot. That's all for now keep up the work author!
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