Alright.... There are a few problems that are glaringly obvious. The grammar is not that great, and the punctuation needs a serious uplift. There are so many problems with the sentence structure that need to be fixed if I want to even start reading this novel. The story is fine and has a quite interesting premise. But the way the characters were introduced did not strike me as pretty great. I think that it should be worked on as well. If you are looking for a novel with only the story in mind, then this is pretty good, but all the important parts like the good building of suspense, and the like are glaringly missing.
Liked it!
ถูกใจthe story has nothing wrong with it, but the grammar has some things to work on... as an author, this was my honest opinion...
Lila_snow:don't listen to this review,it's a big lie. The story is great and everyone says it is how could u say such rud words as a review?
Lila_snow:don't listen to this review,it's a big lie. The story is great and everyone says it is how could u say such rud words as a review?