At the moment the fic just started but there's enough to comment on. The pacing so far is very good, feels just right. The abilities gained are pretty average in the genre but it's what makes this fic unique. No issues grammar wise ( excluding the use of 'soccer', but that's just me being English). The universe is AU so plenty of space for a diverse development. So far so good. Keep up the good work
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