Review Detail of Xana_Shadow in Mountain God Needs No Donations Only Worship Please.

You should really give a warning about it being a Mass crossover. There's a tag for that. The MC doesn't make sense, continually treats the whole thing as an annoying sitcom despite talking about how he can't let it get to his head. I don't mind the overpowered stuff, but more than necessary was his powers and situation more than convenient, almost for literally everything he encountered. It also doesn't make sense that he got used to his powers so soon, or even knew how to make a new body (FMA recipe is inaccurate and it shouldn't even work in a universe where their system of alchemy doesn't exist), alongside the constant characters acting as if he's the one true god.