Review Detail of LucienNg in My Roommate is a Superhero

As of now, the author has only updated 2 chapters so far. But since I like how this is going, I’ll give it a 5. First of all, the story has potential. The characters were brought to life through words alone, and I can even get an idea of their personalities after reading a few lines. I didn’t know I would get so excited for new updates just after reading these two. The pacing, plot, and writing style were all good. There’s only one minor thing though - maybe you shouldn’t repeat the last part of a previous chapter in the next one? Readers could just scroll back to read if they want to anyways. Aside from that, I don’t see any issues. Keep on writing and uploading, don’t give up ☺️