Review Detail of Lazyboi in Marvel with the power of Accelerator.
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Just found this fic today and I can say that this hold a lot of potential considering it's in marvel. The only marvel fic I know in which the mc has vector manipulation is a chinese fic but I almost went brain dead reading it, so I hope this one will be better. The mc nature I think is quite similar to Accelerator in some aspects and to be honest, I don't dislike his overall personality due to it having a certain uniqueness compared to other fic. But I've got to tell you this author-san, don't overdo it when he's interacting with other characters. The grammar is okay in my book because I've seen a lot more horrendous ones but the author should really improved the "I, he, she" views because it gets really confused when you don't know if the characters talking are male or female without seeing their names first. Ps: Also is the mc going to netori Scott? I hate that guy, so watching the mc stealing Jean from him would be pretty satisfying. But it might also not be possible because I don't know which timeline this Marvel world is in.
Marvel with the power of Accelerator.
Danteqqqq
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Jean yes. But Emma had a lot of problems with X-23/Laura. And Laura will be quite important. But as a consolation gift there will be the 5 clones of Emma.
Lazyboi:Well, I hope the best for you and your brain to not die in the process of writing this fic.....but back to my first question, so is there no way to add Emma to the harem? She and Jean are definitely my top waifus.
Actually I did think of Jean. But not in that Jean. Since in the future a young version of the first team of the X-men is brought (Jean, Scott, Hank, Warren and Bobby) In addition, it is not long before Jean dies again. And without her death many things would change. Since the whole plot from Hope to AvX would not make sense.
The Marvel multiverse madness always make me confused but if that's the case then Jean (younger version) would still be in the harem right author-san?
Danteqqqq:Actually I did think of Jean. But not in that Jean. Since in the future a young version of the first team of the X-men is brought (Jean, Scott, Hank, Warren and Bobby) In addition, it is not long before Jean dies again. And without her death many things would change. Since the whole plot from Hope to AvX would not make sense.
Yes. Since at that point Scott and Jean are already married. And Scott is already in psychic romances with Emma. That's why I didn't think about adding Emma either (Although I personally like her). But that would change so many important points.
Lazyboi:The Marvel multiverse madness always make me confused but if that's the case then Jean (younger version) would still be in the harem right author-san?
So looking at your reasoning, then Emma is not going to be in the harem? And what counts as 'canon' for Marvel anyway? I mean if this is the MCU then 'canon' is definitely a thing but if this is the comic version then it's all jumbled up.
Danteqqqq:Yes. Since at that point Scott and Jean are already married. And Scott is already in psychic romances with Emma. That's why I didn't think about adding Emma either (Although I personally like her). But that would change so many important points.
Obviously, if someone is an expert in comics, they will notice small inconsistencies. I doubt there is one though, as it's a complete mess. But by cannon I mean mainly following our mega-events supplemented by comics in parallel. avengers disassembled House of M Civil War hulks return secret invasion. Utopia siege avengers vs xmen And in the middle I will guide myself above all in the X-men comics, New X-men, New Mutans, Astonishing X-men, X-force, X-factor. Which is actually quite confusing, so I'll skip over minor details continuing the story as best my brain dictates.
Lazyboi:So looking at your reasoning, then Emma is not going to be in the harem? And what counts as 'canon' for Marvel anyway? I mean if this is the MCU then 'canon' is definitely a thing but if this is the comic version then it's all jumbled up.
Well, I hope the best for you and your brain to not die in the process of writing this fic.....but back to my first question, so is there no way to add Emma to the harem? She and Jean are definitely my top waifus.
Danteqqqq:Obviously, if someone is an expert in comics, they will notice small inconsistencies. I doubt there is one though, as it's a complete mess. But by cannon I mean mainly following our mega-events supplemented by comics in parallel. avengers disassembled House of M Civil War hulks return secret invasion. Utopia siege avengers vs xmen And in the middle I will guide myself above all in the X-men comics, New X-men, New Mutans, Astonishing X-men, X-force, X-factor. Which is actually quite confusing, so I'll skip over minor details continuing the story as best my brain dictates.
You mean the Cuckoos? I don't read the comic but are their appearance the same as the current Emma in your fic or younger?
Danteqqqq:Jean yes. But Emma had a lot of problems with X-23/Laura. And Laura will be quite important. But as a consolation gift there will be the 5 clones of Emma.
The Cuckoos arrive as 16-year-old students. And at that point Emma should be 27 years old. Confirmed by her, as Esme Cuckoo calls her an old lady.
Lazyboi:You mean the Cuckoos? I don't read the comic but are their appearance the same as the current Emma in your fic or younger?
I have another question not quite relating to what we were discussing about earlier but if your mc have Accelerator's power then could he be able to "awaken" as well?
Danteqqqq:The Cuckoos arrive as 16-year-old students. And at that point Emma should be 27 years old. Confirmed by her, as Esme Cuckoo calls her an old lady.
Lazyboi:I have another question not quite relating to what we were discussing about earlier but if your mc have Accelerator's power then could he be able to "awaken" as well?
Are Toaru characters going to make an appearance in this fic or it's purely Accelerator's power? I'm just curious to see how Othinus would fare against Odin (Marvel).
Danteqqqq:Yes. But it will be later. It is also a somewhat complicated subject.