Review Detail of Marchewmen in League of Legends: My Journey in Runeterra! (Editing)

Chap 9. Story set in Arcane, obviously, with, again, obviously stuff from league of legends, the small indie game. No apparent grammar errors. From the little we've seen Arcane cast feels in character, which is very good in any fanfic, and oc feels like human being so far, and has some normal interaction with parents (0.0). World building feels good, not too much, but enough to feel like reading about piltover. Too little chapters to talk about update stability so i slap a 4(but hoping to at least 1 per week).