Review Detail of John_Jiggler in My Hollywood System

Near flawless grammar and good writing quality. Something you barely see on this site. Don't drop it. System part is very well written. The romance was stupid. Shouldn't have done that. June's pov was stupid af. One of the things 'I am in Hollywood' did right. The mc needs to be more strict in the film set instead of treating it like a gathering of friends. another thing IMIH did right. Tone down on wholesome stuff. Rest great writing. Keep it up