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I'll be honest here this has a lot of potential and superb writing. But the Mc here is trash, a bloody waste who would share OP cheats with any random dog, I mean he would right obviously he didn't work for those powers so he wouldn't care. If you like a beta kind power of friendship Mc this is for you. Good luck author with this. I don't understand why you would give the grandmist technique and a small part of the system to the kid. The Mc could train him normally but why giving him those cheats, author you're main mistake is giving the Mc free items in the shop. This way the Mc doesn't have to work for anything and the trash gets everything for free. Imagine you put the price of senzu beans very expensive the idiot Mc wouldn't even spend it on himself nevertheless a random kid

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