Review Detail of FREAKKETTONE in Living in the past

A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.