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The novel started off great. Had a great pace, where you could tell the story was advancing with the intimate chapters being 2-3 chapters max (which is all you need or it just completely stops progression of the story) and the days he spent training to become stronger didn't drag on. Now however, everything has come to a complete stand still. I've read upto chapter 500 or more but have lost complete interest. he has been training each one of the girls since chapter 550 and it's still going on and the 17 chapter before that was him having s*x with each one of his girls(except with kana since she is only like 10 I think, can't remember) but just saying at 2 chaps a week that would be over two months of the story making 0 progress. and the God d*mn training only needs to be 1 chapter max if your going to do that sh*t individually for each of the girls. I keep thinking I can't wait for him to meet his God mothers and when he goes to his Drage family and kicks ass but I just don't feel like waiting 4 years for the author to get to that point in the novel. So in my opinion, what was once a great novel has come to a complete stand still with literally everything that's gets dragged out (s*x scenes and training) the story hasn't made any progress in over a year so now I have lost all interest in the novel. I will keep it in my library that way 3 years from now when I remember it I can skip all the pointless chapters (s*x scenes and training) and just read the parts that move the story along, hopefully I will be able to read at least 20 chapters before I have to wait another 3 years

The rise of the pervert primordial

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