It's alright so far. Writing quality could use some polishing up, but a good beta reader should solve most of the issues. The dialogue feels a little stilted but that might just be me. Other than that I'm liking what I'm seeing so far and look forward to seeing how the story progresses.
Haluo
Liked it!
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