Review Detail of Gyle_Gyle08 in Requiem of the Lost Exiled

Hey! It's me. The guy from tiktok you js chatted rn. If i were you rn, i'd check up this chapter and make a few upgrades. IT'S JUST THAT, The pacing is too fast. like everything happened in the blink of an eye. You need monologues. Monologues with the mc himself.