Review Detail of Ryo_Toujo in Ode to Sorcery

so i just finished the prologue, but the beginning was incredibly strong. the author definitely know how to map a scene and create enough detail to put a picture in mind, which is quite nice since worldbuilding isn't the easiest task. alongside that, the fight scene was really coherent too, which is also a bit difficult to accomplish. most importantly though, they did an excellent job of making the homunculi come off as a big deal. the tension and Arne's stress prior to the realization made that statement come across very heavily, which is important in a first chapter, but hard to execute. i'd add a critique here, but to this point i don't really have one. they've touched all the bases, and if there's a skill they *are* lacking, its hard to tell- at least to this point. i'll gladly be keeping up with this series!