Review Detail of Landuo in KONOHA EXPERIMENTAL BODY,I BUILD AN INVISIBLE EMPIRE IN THE NINJA WORK

It's an awesome start and a novel idea but the translation if it is one...is horrible, it's not unreadable (barely) but for me I can't read the grammar it's past my line of bad grammar but still readable of 46/100 I can push through but I won't, though I can't deny it's a great story but grammar kills it for me. Overall it's great! (for me after I stopped)