Story lines good so far but the updates are lacking they need to be more to attract readers. However if you were to write this again i would say let jon still be from targaraen and stark and keep that MC of the new child torrhen but if you dont want to make a new one make sure the kids still ned and caitlyn stark such robb, bran, sansa, arya, rikka etc
Oliver_Richardson
Liked it!
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