Review Detail of SOMMO_ARCANO in In This Corner Of The Multiverse

I forgot to mention that when I started reading I thought that having infinite universes and dimensions mc would be better without too much concern for what it does so it doesn't matter if it kills a person or destroys a planet, mc is full of worry and uncertainty every time he tries to save someone, he also has an OP story armor which without that would be a lot in every battle (if not all), mc doesn't seem to have actual growth but the personality changes in jerks without giving us time to adjust or understand why it has changed , there are also moments in which the understood talks about some future moments or other if or things that happened and in various moments it is not clear what happens or why, therefore random plot armor, inconsistent mc, parts of the story skipped or poorly written

i see. and any suggestions? how do i improve that?

mc at first was a manipulator with rick's memory he became more extreme and time wasters, after solving rick's problem he became too soft and easily manipulated especially by girls i understand you are trying to add more texture and that's okay but you are exaggerating all those he took with him were in a priscopathic and violent world as soon as they are with him they change 180 degrees I understand that the fragment of worm gave a more violent option but this too should make people get used to it and make them more violent-sadistic, some part like when does the moon-sized ship okay but why should he try to die against another being? mc is almost omnipotent and uses his strength only to brag, the reason why I started reading history was because I was looking for a mc who having the memories of rick did not fall into various mistakes and was freer with less worries, even the promise that he did not to kill if necessary he seems to torture us readers more, mc can change time, space and reality but he is committed to giving himself problems, I do not think that if you could teleport yourself to another planet you would use a burr and you would waste hundreds of years alone to get there, i understand the journey but no one would, mc doesn't seem to progress as a character but just has extreme character changes in each different world!

I don't want to give you suggestions or tell you what to do but do your own thing and try to be consistent without relying too much on various comments especially because not everyone likes to comment and as soon as they see something wrong they leave or stop reading, try to publish more chapters and try to make them shorter so you can understand the chapter better and give a more focused opinion

yeah. that serms to be a problem. i don't know how to solve it though. i can solve the power problem. starting next chapter mc will use a of his tech to the Full extent. but the character growth problem i don't know how to solve.

thank you.

make like that by erasing rick and erased various things about himself or rick left a backdoor to be right and leave his psyche partially damaged, with the soul gem and its technology he can repair-heal his psyche , becoming complete again he starts to be partly indifferent and tries to make him as a researcher (lover of science) and finds various ways, explores various worlds to quench his thirst and with his thirst for knowledge and experimenting various things he takes a quest more serious towards power and freer from worries when experimenting with various worlds, try to lead mc how to take small steps without doing something too extreme try to keep balance and less plot armor, risks must be controlled and cannot always be stupid and do not think, behind the first floor there is the second and the third and so on of course he should not be prepared for everything but he must also have his problems

this is just an idea it's up to you how to develop it or how to go, don't take a cue from me what you have to do is write your story not the story you change by pleasing and following the comments of others

Mejoro?