Okay I'm writing a review for my own book, just stating what I think
-Pacing bad
-Interaction bad
-Progression (Idk)
-The idea of it I think is ok?
Just not executed properly
So I give myself 3.4 stars
Man you really had a solid basis for this story but it seems to me like you didn’t want to dip your feet into anything deep in fear of mistakes.
You really had a solid basis for you story but just didn’t wanna go the mileage it seems.