Its a very good story, i only have on critic the MC is nothing very special, dont get me wrong i like him its just hes just like Robin or nightwing without any flaws or undesirable traits, like bland chiken, also i think Raven is just a basic desition, but that is just my opinion. But the rest is cool👍🏻 PS: You are a very good Writer keep it up🙏🏻 🚨Bad english Alert🚨
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