Review Detail of BoobVoyage in S/R

This book is good, sometimes the writing can get iffy, but most of the time it's understandable and can even pull off comedic stuff. Story Development is good, it follows canon with it's own twists and butterflies, it's the kind of thing all fans of a series would read without problems. Character design is... eh. Not good, not bad. Didn't really change anything and the Guy Crimson stuff leaves a poor taste in my mouth because I'm a Guy X Velzard dude. Also, the Galahad-ness, which is what attracted me, didn't even last that long so, I'm not that keen on praising the character design part. Updating Stability is good, or I'm just lucky I didn't witness his hiatus. Hehe. World Background Author knows TenSura, and follows the LN. Which is cool, good enough for a fanfiction. Overall, it's a story blown out of proportion in a good way. If you're attracted because of Galahad, like me, then better find other reasons to like it because that becomes unimportant sometime later and merely kept for appearance... actually not even appearance. I stayed because I find it cool and the MC is likeable if you don't mind the heavy sloth. Now, for my question. Whether the author sees this or not. If it follows the LN. Why did you need to do Yuuki that bad? Yuuki isn't the main villain in LN, only in WN. In fact, he's kind of a begrudging ally ala anti-hero in the LN. He's, wayyy wayyyyy different goals and shit wise, so why do him dirty? Though, I guess you let him live because you know that, but still. Just like with the Gay Crimson here. You can call those personal problems, but still.