Review Detail of Godspeed_Augury in Eclipse; Divergence

Guess now is as good a time as any for joining the fun. Author Here. I've been working on this story for about three years prior to uploading and I've settled on taking a strange approach to writing it. The story is mostly sci-fi with fantasy aspects here and there. While the main character and the one to get everything moving is Cassius, I thought it would be cool to have the story follow the perspective of others in the world that live with his actions and choices. So instead of seeing everything as he does it and when he does it you get to see how the things he does effects the world and people. Although I added a prologue at the beginning the entire first part is pretty much a prologue. You won't find much action or the adventure in the first part of the story. There is a lot of world to build up, this story spans a full galaxy or two. But I do promise it will be very action packed in the second part which doesn't take much time to get to. At the time of writing this I estimate at 25 chapters we should be moving on. It's definitely a work in progress still as I'm still trying to figure out how to frame certain things but I'm open to any feedback and hope you'll give the story a chance.