Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in infinite loop

This novel has a very good plot. The author clearly has a very creative and active imagination so his intentions for the novel are clear. However, this novel is prematurely written and the author seems inexperienced. There are countless errors in the three chapters I've read so far. Capitalization errors are straight throughout, all sentences start with common letters and words that shouldn't be capitalized are capitalized. This frustrated me more than anything. Grammar was off, completely off. Punctuation marks were either misused or not used at all. The story kind of flowed, but the wording was absolutely terrible. The novel itself lacked a proper structure and there was no room for development. In the first chapter, the author kept referring to the mc as well mc, I found it very annoying. The author also continuously skipped from first person point of view to third person point of view, which made everything very confusing. I found everything about this novel extremely confusing. I recommend that the author read other novels of the same genre of his book, re-read his work, download and use Grammarly or Proofreader or get an editor. Overall, this novel actually has potential but it's too rawly written. I hope the author can work on their craft and get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]