Nice story, though you are in a (very) serious need for an Editor. I liked the names. But right now the novel feels to much like other fiction-fantasy novels...I am looking forward to the other chapters. Keep it up and Keep it going!!
Rick_Bhattacharyya
Liked it!
ถูกใจไม่มีการตอบกลับ เป็นคนแรกสิ!