Hi, the author here. It's my first novel guys. I am pretty inexperienced about but I will try to become better at this. I hope you will enjoy this novel.
Small_Otaku
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ถูกใจTog_Python:Why? Let thEre romance and haErm of like 3Girlz one human ,elf and a dragon
Junkies:bro this just some suggestions perhaps if u want to write another novel slow pace like this, try changing pov, and improve conversation between character. or if u want to improve ur skill at that try rewrite some funny conversation u had. cheer's [img=recommend]
question why are the later chapters locked??? just a question about the fan-fic before i read also had this saved since you started uploading just forgot all about it lol their are so many fan-fics to read nowadays.
Small_Otaku:Thanks man.
bso:You use grammerly and paraphrasin g tool man the story is good and all bit the wording is killing the exp erience man anyway good job i finished all the chapter in one day
Actually, I don't know how to appoint a editor. Don't worry I will try appoint a editor. thanks for the support.
Precious_Presh_6266:This is a suggestion on my path. If you can afford an editor, it would be better, because the pov of the story is a little of and gives little to no enjoyment to the reader. Anyway good job
Dragon8992:If this jovel has romance/harem I would start reading it?