Although there are some grammatical errors here and there, the story is quite great. I'm excited to see how Zeus with develop as a person and what kind of man he will become in the future. His power is also amazing especially the way he took out those men with his "Incineration" power. Great job[img=recommend] Looking forward to updates
Kinsamay
Liked it!
ถูกใจIce_Princesss:You should try using Grammarly to assist you with things like spelling and grammar. It does wonders 😊
You should try using Grammarly to assist you with things like spelling and grammar. It does wonders 😊
Kinsamay:Thank you I am definitely going to try to write Zeus like a real person. Also my grammatical errors will improve , thank you for reading.