Review Detail of Choco_Monster in I'm Really in NBA...or not.

Review written after chapter 29 update. The concept is fun but the character design is a bit confusing. Another problem I saw is the writing, not the technique per se, but the spelling of some words. Now I'm not sure if you are deliberately doing it or its autocorrect being a jerk, one piece of advice I could give you is that you download Grammarly to fix your little problem. I am only pointing this out because there is repetitive use of the letter "u" in replacement of the word "you" and other similar cases. Overall, it was a confusing work but it was enjoyable. I recommend that you look for a proofreader or an editor. It was fun and I hope to read more, looking forward to future updates.