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Scientist_113
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Your grammar is not something that can be understood while reading. I had to look through a sentence about five times to ensure I could understand what you wrote. You started your story in Present tense and ended with Past tense. The tense you start with, should be what you use to end. If I am to continue, I might give you a harsh review so I will end here.

A blooming love: fate and destiny

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Liked it!

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Luv_cattos
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Thank you for you comment! I'll try hard to improve it!

leoreview1
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