Review Detail of Uncrowned_Hokage in One Piece: Zayn The Celestial Dragon

Honestly I love opmc but here, I'm not gonna complain about the grammar cuz I'm also bad at it. For the wishes I like on what he wishes, which is system shop which he can buy anything and an unlimited points. I kinda don't like is the enslaving, which he can literally enslaved everyone in the world, the time he buys the skill that can make someone their slave, makes him for me strongest in that world. What I don't really like is where he recruit more like enslaved in a different way just without using the slave skill. I just it's not for me. One Piece fanfic for me is aside from becoming OP which mostly ff will do at the end of the story are ,adventuring ,building up relationship, becoming strong and etc. while here he can just pick anyone then make them loyalty to the max then 75x training effect like the first mate and it will make them OP, idk if the author will put a thing where if someone has a stronger mind they can't be enslave. Well that's just it, this only my review, read this ff if you like the concept of the story Btw author I really envy you for writing something, I have a tons of idea for a story but I can't just write it up or maybe I was too lazy HAHAHAHAHAHAH