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It's an amazing story with clarity, I love it and can't wait to continue reading it Good job done dear But I think in order get more interesting for most of we the readers, there should be more suspense so that we can't easily predict what will happen. Because when one begins to predict the next action in a story, the story turns out to be super boring and less interesting. My idea tho

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Thank you very much ❤️