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2024-09-13 19:11

Writing Quality (3★), Updating Stability (5★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (3★), world background (1★). It's not a bad story, it's entertaining. The characters are sometimes funny. As of this writing, there are daily chapters. There are plot holes and situations that contradict past events. I was generous with the character design score. They're not flat for the most part and follow a reasonable logic (not always). As for the background of the world... I can only point out that in chapter 14, there's a reset that cancels out all the previous chapters. This last one bothered me so much that I'm going to give it some time to get more chapters out. And if it improves, I'll change my score. (Traductor)

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