Twilight meets Beauty and the Beast! Love Elsa already and I'm barely ten chapters in. Her pure innocence is honestly so refreshing! I can't wait to see how her personality contrasts with our MC. A small complaint is that there are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't ruin the overall reading experience. Honestly, I'd say it doesn't even matter, especially when the plotline is so interesting. Great work author!!
Pixiepiu
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ถูกใจPixiepiu:Thank you for the review. If you do not have any problem then you can point out some grammatical errors in this one to ten chapters. It will help me a lot.
I pointed out a few things that could be changed in the first ch. I suggest you download grammarly and add it as an extension to your chrome browser. That's what helped me proofread my work faster.
Pixiepiu:Thank you for the review. If you do not have any problem then you can point out some grammatical errors in this one to ten chapters. It will help me a lot.