I like how the story begins. It piques the reader's interest and makes the reader want to read further. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but those are minor things that can be fixed. Overall, the story is very interesting and I praise the author for having such a creative writing stills.
zeraluvs
Liked it!
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