Review Detail of Cultureshock_poet in 00 : 07 ; Seven minutes to doom (Spy vs spy )

Okay, firstly this is some fantastic execution of plot. The first chapter is captivating and keeps the readers interest till the very end. All in all a great way to start the story. Now what I didn't like was confusing dialogue quotations and punctuation mistakes. Though as we progress further in the story these mistakes reduce in number so, I might be nitpicking here. Other than that the story is fantastic.