Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in The Saga of a Reincarnator

Writing quality- English is a different subject, and there is a lot of room for the author to learn more about it. The writing quality is okay, compared to other novels I've read here in webnovel. However, I do want to suggest a few things. The "showing" vs "telling" part. Throughout the novel, all I read was telling. Althouhg the room (in the first chapter) was described as small, it still needs to show how small it was. Like bumping his head against the roof. And even the pain that Mike felt when the man who hated nobles banged his head. We as readers want to know how deep were the wounds and that throbbing pain Mike felt during that time. Stability updates-on second thought, this is a recent novel. 5/5!!!! Story Development- Great! There are few instances from here and there that (for me) seems sudden. Like for an example the man who tried abducting Mike and his sister. It would be more powerful if that guy wasn't a random stranger but someone he knows. Or someone Mike would know soon. But the developments are there! So 5/5! Character Design- Fantastic! I think his struggles in life are there. But it would become more powerful if it was shown, not tell. World background- Good! Again, the show vs tell part. Besides that, this novel is great! i like it! Kudos for the author!