Review Detail of Ickysauce in My Life as a Gamer Across the Multiverse(ENG)

The first world was me testing what I could do, from the second world is where I start to create my own plot, and about women they are not dolls or anything like that, in case you did not read it is my first fanfiction, therefore I have You learn to develop a compelling relationship.

I've not read this yet but it's rather realistic if the guy hops into a dungeon to powerlevel when he has a gamer system, anyone who was dropped into an apocalyptic world and didn't make use of their cheats to survive would be an absolute idiot.

Nvm I've started reading it, before the apocalypse the guy doesn't do any kind of grinding or stocking up on supplies, he simply goes to simp on Saeko and work out at a gym, he selected Highschool of the Dead as his first world out of several clearly knowing what world is what and all of a sudden doesn't know the plot when he arrives there yet still follows canon and simps for girls, relationships (pokemon collecting tbh) do not progress or even start realistically; mc meets Tsun chick during outbreak > goes up and hugs her after telling her his name out of literally nowhere > says she looks cute with glasses > Tsun chick is now in love with the mc (complete with system notification), this novel has a lot of promise but the unbelievable relationship progression, mc knowing and following plot one second and not knowing it at all the next seriously breaks immersion. (not going to talk about grammar since it's simply the Spanish novel run through google translate word for word so expect she/he her/him being wrong.)