Review Detail of geewintG in My Destiny As The Villainess

Reaching up to the third chapter, the world building and plot seems to be interesting, however, the narration lacks a great deal of descriptive-ness. Try learning more about descriptive writing for more authenticity and in-depth narration. It would help readers dive deeply to more of your world-building and plot, as well as handling emotions. Moreover, I noticed a few parts when shifting to a different perspective, you used third person. The point of view needs to be consistent. If it's first person then it needs to be like that all the way. If you want to shift POV's and tell the reader, you could put it above the narration in bold letters so they wouldn't be confused.