I’ve had this novel in my library, desperately waiting to review it. I am in love with the story’s cover! It reminds me of a book from my childhood (painted me in nostalgia, a fine thing in my opinion). Reading the story, I can almost feel the author’s brain working to produce this fine piece of art. By Chapter Three, I was assured that this was a lovely story. Your use of descriptives is absolutely amazing, my favourite line being “mismatched colours and worn out clothing and carpet” or a line to that extent. Brilliant imagery 💚 I would only suggest to go at a more moderate pace (faster) in order for the reader to constantly be engaged in your story. However, this is totally up to you - your world is under your control ✨
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