Review Detail of SEP1A in Hero's Genesis

This story absorbs you into its cosmos and the writer strings you along the adventure of a light-year. With a relatable protagonist - a college junior just trying to survive - the intimacy I felt with Felix was magical. Great pacing, no grammatical errors, amazing play on structure, meaningful characters, and immense specificity; this is the work of a well-seasoned writer! (Seriously, this is better than some paperbacks I've read) The author has a great voice that had me chuckling with every page turned (or screen scrolled). To attract more readers, I would only suggest slight changes to your synopsis: The cutting of fluff words and sentences in its first paragraph. By fluff, I mean words and adjectives that aren't of paramount importance e.g. 'Starting' (versus beginning your synopsis with the immersive 'in'), 'Able to ... to Earth', 'It was ... ranks'. Of course, this is just my personal preference and I could be in the ditches but the first paragraph would then become, "In the year 2026, seven people became the world's first superhumans; the Seven revered. The heroes of comic books and stories became real." Or, alternatively, "2026 saw the dawn of the world's first superhumans, the Seven revered. The heroes of comic books and stories became real." or something else to your content. Then, you launch off into the subsidiaries. You can always add the cuts back in after that. Either way, I can't wait to keep reading the rest of Hero's Genesis! Thus ends my obscenely long review teeming with way too much fluff in its own right!