If I am being real here, there is no way so many constellations would show up this early on. MUCH LESS ACTUALLY CARE ABOUT HIS WELL BEING OR WORRY ABOUT HIM.
EnderGolem997
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ถูกใจHey, thanks for the review. I saw your comments, and I will admit, when I first began this story, I did rush into it and not give it proper, gradual development at first. I skipped around because I wanted to rush into the action, and as the saying goes, "Only fools rush in." Anyways, thanks for giving it a read, and I hope any novel I make in the future impresses you then!