Review Detail of nacht in A Loners Creations

the problem i have with this fanfic is mainly the writing quality, because of some typo, weird choice of word, misplacement of (" "), lack of uses of comma in a sentence, and some sentence is so convoluted that i have to read multiple times to make sense of it. for the minor problem of this fanfic is the character design of some antagonist(?) kinda off put for me and the upload schedule is not consistent. for the story and world background i think I will give 5 star(?)