Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Making the Demon Lord Love Me

Let me start by saying I don't like this topic and these are not my type of stories at all. However, the writing and stability of updates seems solid with this story. The character development and world background is legit. The story development is also solid. The action sequences seem solid overall. I always think there could be a bit more description in stories that I'm reading. I think there were some parts where the grammar was off when it came to punctuation. I also don't like the idea of anyone dating anything occultic, but that's more of a personal view.