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Review Detail of Suoshi in Yin-Yang Harmony System

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Suoshi
SuoshiLv23yrSuoshi

Pretty good writing style. I have no major grammar or vocab errors to report. But the world background could do with a bit of shaping up. Other than that, not bad.

Yin-Yang Harmony System

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PumpkinKat
PumpkinKatLv1PumpkinKat

English committed sepuku

Princezik14
Princezik14Lv13Princezik14

are we reading the same novel ??

DraskelClan
DraskelClanLv15DraskelClan

really? the English in this isn't the worst I've seen, but it is pretty close to bad.

Suoshi
SuoshiLv2Suoshi

i wrote this review in the early days of the novel lol, i dunno how it's improved

DraskelClan:really? the English in this isn't the worst I've seen, but it is pretty close to bad.