Review Detail of saginij303 in The Power of Evil

CONFUSING. FULL OR ERRORS, EVEN THE MOST BASIC RULE OR SHE AND HE IS A MESS UP. AUTHOR NEEDS TO REREAD HIS WORK TWICE OR TRICE THEN FIX THIS BASIC MISTAKE. STORY IS VERY PREDICTABLE. UNTIL HE FIX THE BASIC MISTAKE AT EARLY CHAPTERS NOT WORTH READING