A classic tale that all women pine for: when you are all alone in the world and you meet the one that you know your are fated to be with. Great beginning. No dilly dallying; the story gets to its business right away. The MC meets the (possibly) ML, and the ML clearly feels pull. Chemistry is awesome and so are the characterizations. Very clean. Very few typos and grammatical errors that in no way hamper the flow or the meaning of the story. Great job, author. I will continue to read and hope you continue to write.
Sweetdreamer20
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