Review Detail of Prince_nonchalant in Quick Transmigration Of The Divine Phoenix

I haven't read many transmigration books so I didn't know what to expect. However, I'm sure that anyone that loves these kinds of books will at least take a look at it and read through. It doesn't seem like a bad book in any way. I also liked how the first chapter began with a poem. Not many books do that from my experience, so props to the author. Synopsis: Gave the introduction to the story quite neatly. However, there were a few grammatical errors present that could be addressed. Writing Quality: Far from unreadable but there were a few run-on sentences, missing words, and incorrect use of punctuations. But there aren't that many so it doesn't bother the reader as much. Story Develoment: Moves at a decent pace or rather quickly lol. The first chapter immediately got into it with the MC being crushed which almost seemed out of nowhere. That was cool. Character Design: Not much was said in regards to the characters but I usually don't mark authors down for this because it's a matter of preference tbh. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look rather than have them described so this could go both ways. Overall, keep pressing forward author. I'm sure you can gain the views and fanbase you require if you push hard enough!